Friday, October 16, 2009

Bloor line West, October

This poem has been taken down for submission to a publication. Apologies for the inconvenience.


Dorkmaster Flek said...

I made not be particularly fond of poetry, but that's beautiful. :) This may be incredibly nerdy, but the people who work on Magic and Harmonix reaffirm my faith in humanity. Besides this poem, of course. :)

Mary said...

I think every subway rider can relate to this poem. I can visualize every single thing you wrote about... I really like this one!

Happy Birthday blog!!

Desire said...

Wow! I love this poem. You have definately honed your skills. I come and read your poems anytime I need inspiration or just to have a guilty moment of pleasure at work.
Happy 1 year Anniversary to you and your blog.
You know you're good when you have an addict on your hands. I'm addicted to your poetry baby~

Katie said...

Unexpected general kindness from people seems to reaffirm my faith in humanity. Like when someone holds the door for you, or actually is sorry when they bumped you on the bus.

Anyway, happy birthday blog!! It really was a good idea that you've stuck to so I'm proud of you sister.

Now ... more poems, more poems!

BPOTW said...

Congrats on your one year anniversary! Your poems are great and I hope you keep writing.

Claudia said...

I really liked this one.

When people smile at each other, or when I exchange smiles with a stranger, it reaffirms my faith in humanity.

Jerry said...

Glad to make my first comment for your poems on this day of blog birth bliss!

Lots of potent images for such a short poem, especially the first couple of lines in the third stanza. What mood are you conveying here? I felt a detached serenity.