Saturday, October 3, 2009

Ashley, who is Special, practices aloud on the streetcar

This poem has been taken down for submission to a publication. Apologies for the inconvenience.


Shannon Teresa said...

we've all been here - though her game seems kinda weak. Tell your friend Ashley to substitute library card with leopard print g-string DSOL :D

Dorkmaster Flek said...

Is that one of those things where everybody on the streetcar sticks their nose in a book and pretends not to hear anything? :)

katie said...

I actually have no idea what this is about.

Adelaide said...

I tried to explain or at least hint what the poem is about in the title: Ashley, who is literally mentally retarded, practices aloud on the streetcar. The rest of the poem is what Ashley says aloud as she practices. It's kind of a found poem, because I actually overheard this girl Ashley saying this.

Joanne Cucinello said...

Adelaide . . . you are such a POET!! Catching whatever the wind blows by,
finding meaning enough . . . to frame it in a poem.
I'll be back to read some more. Actually I have already . . . but will comment again.
Totally enjoy your style.