Friday, May 1, 2009

Underground rooftop patio

This poem has been taken down for submission to a publication. Apologies for the inconvenience.

4 comments:

Mary said...

Yes, the pringle duck beak is a tricky one!!

Dorkmaster Flek said...

Mary, you are hilarious. :) Soon darling, our house will be east! And close!

Claudia said...

:) Awwe I liked the last verse of this one.

Shannon Teresa said...

I am actually not a poetry fan. I really do feel as though I grew out of it: either the rhyming was too obvious and juvenile or too obscure and pompous. Your poetry has the power to change my mind - it's that good.
Wonderfully imagery, I actually get what you're talking about. I just feel like I'm reading a fat free story with tons of fresh fruit in it.
Canadians sooo love being mentioned by Americans, that made me laugh!