Monday, March 9, 2009

Two steps ahead

This poem has been taken down for submission to a publication. Apologies for the inconvenience.

4 comments:

Dorkmaster Flek said...

I like this one. It's really tricky to write good rhyming poetry, but this worked great. Eat your heart out, Leanard Cohen. :)

Mona said...

thanks for writing this. It lifted my spirits at a moment when I was weak

Claudia said...

This has to be one of my favourites you have ever written.

Claudia said...

I feel like it needs a melody.